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this was just something kinda random o3o'' but enjoy i don't know what should happen next so if ya wanna work on this together note me x3 oh and sorry for my bad grammer ^^;

"Beyond...?'' L asked Watari, pacing around the room with his back arched down, as usual.
"Beyond has a daughter..?'' L questioned once more.
Watari looked up from his laptop screen and nodded. "And she's on her way here..." Watari stated. L stopped pacing and looked at Watari. "Where are her parents?" L asked, sitting down with his knees near his chest.
"Beyond killed her mother...and Beyond left his daughter...But some nice people saw her and took her to the local hospital because she was dehydrated. She will be arriving from the hospital in a bit" Watari answered.
L looked out the window with a worried look. He felt bad because he would always speak ill of Beyond Birthday in front of everyone at Wammy's...They'll probably view his innocent daughter as evil as him..."What's her name?" L asked while popping a sugar cube into his mouth. "I don't know" the old man said, running his fingers thru his grey hair.
Just then, two boys ran into L's office. One who is blonde, wearing all black and one with red hair, holding a handheld game device. "Mello, Matt, what happened?" L asked, slightly tilting his head. "She's here" said the blonde. L immediatly stood up as he heard little footsteps come towards the door. Slowly, the brown, woodendoor opened, revealing a little girl. Everyone in the office stopped and looked at the girl...the spitting image of Beyond Birthday...red eyes..black hair...pale skin...serious expression. "Daddy?" the little girl questioned, looking at L with big eyes. L looked back with a confused face until he remembered that he looks just like Beyond. "N-No but I am your uncle, L" L replied. The little child looked down and held the pendant that was a B...Beyond's signature letter..."What's your name?'' Mello asked, standing next to the girl who was only a year younger than him. "Hotaru..." she answered. Everyone looked at her once more, realizing what the namemeans. Hotaru means darkness anddespair in japanese..."My name meanshow my life is'' Hotaruwhispered, looking at the numbers floating above everyone's heads with her Shinigami eyes..."I can see the numbers"Hotaru whispered again.
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:iconlryuzaki4life:
LRyuzaki4life Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
This is wonderful!! :)
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coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Photographer
aww thanks x3
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:iconlryuzaki4life:
LRyuzaki4life Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012
You're very welcome :)
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iLurve Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student General Artist
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD. MORE. AND CAN I BE HER MOM~ :P
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coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
aww thanks x3 i'll try to continue it. be her mom? but, but you would die!!!
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iLurve Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
I was just suggesting, I love B <3 And YES! CONTINUE IT!!! YOU MUST!
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coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
i love him to x3 we'll see i have no idea's for it so i may not ^^;
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:iconilurve:
iLurve Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
AW:) Well, I hope you do!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
^^
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:iconilurve:
iLurve Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
:)) ^^
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coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Photographer
:D if ya have any idea's for da story please tell ;3
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JUSTICEvsREALITY Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
OH MY GOD!
CONTINUE THIS!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Photographer
xD glad ya like it
i wanna continue it but i'm brain dead :P
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:iconjusticevsreality:
JUSTICEvsREALITY Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
ahah! just do your best... PLEASE?
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Photographer
ok i'll try ^.^
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:iconjusticevsreality:
JUSTICEvsREALITY Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
THANKYOU!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Photographer
xD your welcome!
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Forever-N Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god you should totally continue this! This rocks! Just remember that you should start a new paragraph whenever someone new speaks. //shotdeadbyMelloforbeingagrammarnazi
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Photographer
thanks sorry i'm kinda new at writing fanfic ^^;
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:iconforever-n:
Forever-N Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh it's okay~ :iconsupertighthugplz: I make mistakes too!!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Photographer
thanks :iconbrohugplz:
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Luppi-chan9 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 :D
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Photographer
glad ya like it ^^
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:iconluppi-chan9:
Luppi-chan9 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha. its good. :3
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Photographer
thanks x3
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:iconavpmfreakify101:
AVPMfreakify101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
:iconohnoesplz: OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!!! I can't wait for more... please tell there'll be more or else I'll have to ask for you name, first and last please! ;)
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
aww thanks so much!! i'll see what i can do just please don't kill me xD
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:iconavpmfreakify101:
AVPMfreakify101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
lol well I can't if I never get your name now can I?!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
um i forgot my name oh well xD
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:iconavpmfreakify101:
AVPMfreakify101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
u_u sure... lol
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
it happens all the time o3o"
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:iconavpmfreakify101:
AVPMfreakify101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
lol nice...
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
lol yea
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Silverwolf51 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG, This is so awesome!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
really thanks x3 this is one of my first fanfic so it means a lot <3
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Silverwolf51 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, I'm a newbie too. I've only written a poem that is on my profile about a video game character named Namine. That makes us in the same boat!
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
woo!!! awesome :D
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Silverwolf51 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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MoonSpider95 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Writer
ooh, I hope this continues :XD:
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
me too glad ya like it! <3
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:iconmoonspider95:
MoonSpider95 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Writer
oh, and as a tip: if you edit the text after you upload it to space out between the lines it makes it easier to read.
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
ok thanks ^^
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:iconunknowngal:
unknowngal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw i think i can help a little. can i ?
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
i would love that!! thanks just note me ;D
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:iconunknowngal:
unknowngal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok it might be short cause my thinksing needs to be charge heheehe :stupidme:
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
xD ok thanks!
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:iconunknowngal:
unknowngal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) your welcome
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:iconcoolcatdanya007:
coolcatdanya007 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student Photographer
:D
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:iconunknowngal:
unknowngal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D
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H-E-A-R-T-L-E-S-S Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome xD
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